Scanned feedback sheets + Ms. Britt's
The purpose of this page is to put all of the documents that have been critique by my peers and Ms. Britt
Are first draft was not as good as are rest of poems because we were trying to do haiku's for all of are parts but it did not really work because what we wanted to say did not really fit on the haiku's and would not make that much sense when it was in in the haiku's order
For are second draft we decided to take out the haiku's and just put a personal story about each one of us in the group so it could be a little more easy for us to be able to write what ever we wanted to write and what we wanted to express through are work